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Pixel Art / Re: Poppin Mockup Continuation
« on: August 16, 2007, 12:25:11 pm »
I'm really liking the trees now, they have a sense of motion about them that's very appealing. I'm not sure if you're already working on it, but i just thought i'd back the comments on the path being too straight. It just doesn't work with the organic style you've got going here. Also, the blue flowers your character is chopping up look a bit strange. Very sharp and noisy, in a way. I think a more abstract representation would do the trick here. Maybe it's because of all the internal lines. I realise you're using those to define the shapes, but it really seems like it doesn't leave quite enough space for the actual forms they're trying to describe.