That is certainly much better anatomically. Your posture is lacking. You're not using the off hand to give this character any traits, especially, you're obstructing the fingers. After the face, the hands are the most expressive part of the human, and the face is all hairy and oversharpened, and the hand is obscured. The other has a magic blue glow. As rendering practise, this is great, congrats on upgrading your cg painting skill. As an illustration piece which should be carrying emotion and contextual information for the character, you can do much better.