Fixed the perspective, shaded and drew out the bricks, fixed up my colors and removed all NPA. There should now be 59 colors, still a large number but much better than before.
One problem I can't think of a good way to fix: As I mentioned, the roof of the store isn't a complete perspective disaster, it's actually supposed to be beveled. Since the building is viewed from the direct front, I didn't draw the top, as it would be directly perpendicular to the view. I can't figure out how to make the shape of the roof clear - it's supposed to be simple, almost cartoonish, the turquoise parts are left untextured for a reason, at least for now.
Any help would be greatly appreciated.
EDIT: Urgh, I'm sorry, that was supposed to be an edit on the last post, not a double. Sorry
- EDIT2: One more thing, the ideal zoom is 2x