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Offline Antonisthier

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Yeti Gremlin Monster

on: June 28, 2018, 11:24:44 am
Hello everyone,

looking for some critique and feedback for a monster I made for a game.



Inspiration was a yeti, but then I moved to a more Gizmo-esque design (from Gremlins).
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Re: Yeti Gremlin Monster

Reply #1 on: June 28, 2018, 02:03:36 pm
The character looks a bit off-balance because the head and belly are so far forward of the legs. Moving one of the feet should help, and it would make for a more dynamic stance, too.

One of the nostrils blends with an eye. Maybe use a lighter colour for the nostrils? They don't seem important enough to be black anyway.

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Re: Yeti Gremlin Monster

Reply #2 on: June 28, 2018, 02:23:08 pm
Thanks for the feedback! How about this?