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Offline Dazurus Milestone

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My own Character..again

on: June 25, 2008, 02:04:02 am
Well this my own character. The 1st one is incomplete but the second is. I call him Giovanni Vera. The second is supposed to be JUS Style :) C&C appreciated :)

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Re: My own Character..again

Reply #1 on: June 25, 2008, 09:05:40 am
Hello. What is 'JUS style'?

Turn this sprite in just a black color silhouette against white and tell me if you can understand what the hand is doing and what it is holding. I know it's a gun from context, but it shouldn't be obstructed, I'd say.

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Re: My own Character..again

Reply #2 on: June 25, 2008, 10:23:32 am
Unless he just fired that gun, i think that the gun should either be:

- Vertical, slightly leaning to the back.

or

- Have the gun rest on the shoulder, barrel pointing back.

Right now it looks kinda awkward, like he's scratching the back of his head or something. :huh:
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