Thanks for the feedback. (Is it not clearly a girl?
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The clothing is meant to be very loose-fitting like the girl's in this picture, so I think It should move quite a bit:
Do you think that explanation is sufficient, or do you still think it looks wrong?
I smoothed out the motion of the ponytail and improved the bangs. Also experimented with some specular highlights:
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Can't decide how I feel about the highlights... What say y'all?
EDIT: Made some minor tweaks.