What is the red rod shaped object intended to be? If it is a sword I would recommend making it look more metallic and sharper edged, and maybe make the handle another color from the blade. I think it is hard to read as is. What's up with the grey pixel on the left toward the foot area that goes outside the outline? Also, the face looks much longer in the sketch than the pixel work, I wonder what it would look like if it were longer like that... The pleats from the skirt don't show up in the pixels well either.

Thats what I did a red rod shaped as a sword, like those wooden sword but with also a rod design to it.
 For the face I use castlevania character for reference rather than my drawing... is just for making it default as doing a new character for an sequel.

Sorry for the skirt so far I haven't come up with a solution...

Thanks

Since the sprite is so small it could use some more contrast between the shades.

Hmmm I'll try that
thanks