hey
@Dragon: Firstly I think the character of your fighter is cool, I like it. I dont understand the shading of his right arm, looks quite odd to me... AND I think the other arm could be better defined also? The pants look rather messy, well maybe it's just them dark lines through out them! The design of the boots look a little odd to me, I think they lack definition. In the portrait I think his hand seems to small? compared to the size of his arm! AND I like what
Grops has done to smooth out and further define the portrait, I think you should take his advise...
Anyhows I am really quite looking forward to see how this turns out, I think it could be quite good!
EDITI attempted an edit of your sprite to try and help, hope you dont mind? someone else can probly do better than what I have done, as I'm no expert. As you can see I tried to fix the arms, neck and legs a bit more to my liking AND didn't touch the boots as yet. I also organised the pallete, there were alot of stray colors?
NOTE: Think I lost the
dragonball z'ness style folds with my edit to the legs... But yea, I think you need to lighten them dark lines defining the folds!
EDITI mostly just redone the pants somewhat...
EDIT AND/OR
AND/OR
I just redone the arms...
EDIT AND
I just edited the rest as I thought... really hope you dont mind? AND I didn't know how the boots were meant to be... :\
cyas