Hello! I like to see you brancing out and trying ambitious things, this has a lot of promise.
*Women have lower hairlines than men, generally.
*Eye was too high, and I rotated it some for the sideview, you wouldn't be able to see so much of it from that point of view, right?
*Nose was strangely defined in my opinion, especially nosetril, and the shape of the ridge was a big vague, sitting uncomfortable somewhere between animeland and realopolis.
*Lips also could use forms that read better even if you don't want a smile.
*But if you don't want a smile, go for some other clear (I don't mean simple, just not confused or half-done) expression, as right now your gal has none
*I won't say much for the palette right now, I don't think Adarias pulled that sort of contrast and hue gaps off when he tried them and I don't think you will either right now, but it all depends on how you go about it, I'm ready to stand corrected.