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Cake Sama
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My little guy and fire and ghosty
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March 22, 2009, 04:46:26 pm
Haven't posted in here or actually done some pixeling in a while, trying to get back into it again. Its a lot harder than I remember
Here a guy and a rough fire anim I made, any advise will be appreciated
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Emtch
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Re: My little guy and fire and ghosty
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March 23, 2009, 06:36:18 am
Welcome back.
The fire looks like a blob. Think about how fire moves, it's not static with some vibration.
The character looks flat, try some shading.
The gost looks too solid, and the lines are very jaggy.
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