what can i say? it's pretty good for winging it.
your form for the hips and breasts there are not bad, but it is lacking few key turns that you've smoothed. it's easy to do. here is a sketch to illustrate the female figure (as i understand it, this is done without reference so you wont want to take it TOO seriously):
Hips - you've missed the place where the muscles that form the thigh end the hips come out, and the obliques (which surround the organs) come out from behind them with the skin folding up tight around the bone, loose around the "lovehandles" (which exist even for well defined men and women).
Breasts - Note this is idealized. You may want less firmed breasts, but her face seems too young for that.
pixelwise:
few too many colors that aren't helping.
some AA wouldn't be amiss.
PS if anyone is wondering why all of my sketches are done in Paint, it's because my computer stopped recognizing external drives - no flash, no portable, no camera, no scanner)
« Last Edit: November 06, 2007, 11:15:22 pm by Adarias »
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