Hey Sokota
Its ok, here are some crits.
1). The collar on the jacket needs to fold outward
2). His shoulders are really stiff
3). Looks flat
4). Needs shading (but your getting to that)
5). Thats like a monster zipper
Almost as big as his jacket pocket
6). The neck is pretty wierd. Too boxy.
Here's an edit adressing some of the issues stated above:
Nice work, and keep it up.
-Lunar