Ride what?
Anyhow, I tried to improve the picture a bit. It is obvious you’re not a big fan of Japanese cartoons? I am, so that`s probably
why my style got bent in that direction, although I try to develop a more realistic manga style.
There is a lot of manga styles which I do have a problem with, and unfortunly the shape of the face of my sprite reminds me
of those, that’s why I wanted tips on how to change this.
I have some mayor problems with the head, not making it look like it`s a manga teacup face. Biggest problem is that the face
tilts to the right. Drawing a more "detailed" outline when it is that small and in that angle is really hard, I have spend a couple
of hours bending and twisting the face to no good. I guess I could "untilt" the face but I think that would make the picture
as a whole look less interesting.
I also changed:
*The tail, I think it`s better but probably could get even better.
*Left leg is a bit longer, I think it was to short before.
*Changed the highlights in the hair, I don’t really know if this is better or not.
*Tried to make the palette less rough. I don`t think I’m to good at this, for now I`ve drawn an outline with a softer colour on the cloths
shadows to make it less sharp.
*Made the irritating teacup face smaller to fit the body, but in doing this I think the torso seems "of".
*Fixed a lot of small stuff which I can`t remember, but I changed it.
Thank you for helping.