haaay...no me joda, Hapip es hombre?.....yo juraba que era mujer, creo que hasta te coquetie en Pxtion XD.....ya entiendo porque no me respondiste xp
Ok, now that the embarassing remark that I hope you guys dont babelfish is out of the way, glad to see u back happip, I always did like that blonde fairy thing you made, and the other screenshots back at pxtion.
Anyways, I thought you had been given enough of a lengthy and well done crit by my Helmetudo over there, I'm gonna try to keep mine short (compared to my usual fare that is
) um, to tie things better, do not focus so much on the details when you start the portrait try to think only of the way everything lines up and the picture's axis, etc, and do NOT use those lengthy robe-like clothes to avoid thinking of how all of her actual limbs go, cause it WILL show (broken waist, broken left leg).
Originally I just wanted to make a remark on how good the feet on the new pic are (I didnt even mean to make a crit, it's against my nature tho
) , I literally wouldnt change anything about them feet, I love the way the little feathers on the slippers continue the line the toes create. The collar, the clumps of hair on the sides of her head, the pose of the little pet guy, and the tip of his tail.