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Pixel Art / Re: School Project.
« on: January 16, 2009, 12:22:40 pm »
This isn't so much a comment on your art itself but rather your concept-- If he's a zombie, I think it would better if he was kind of dragging his weight rather than walking briskly, y'know? Also maybe add some rotting flesh type stuff.

But for a first character this is good! : D  Welcome aboard the S.S. Pixelation.

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Pixel Art / Re: Turtle Bubble!
« on: January 14, 2009, 06:04:48 am »
Hm.. I think the shell should be overlapping the tops of his legs. Looks cute, I'm excited to see how it turns out.  ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: Begginer
« on: January 13, 2009, 10:29:02 pm »
That it's disproportionate goes without saying, it was obviously intended.  :P

The entire body looks solid black to me though, maybe use lighter highlights? Or different colors? xP Up to you. Other than that, I can't find any real fault with it. :)

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Pixel Art / Re: Me!
« on: January 12, 2009, 12:59:40 am »
Because of time constraints, I'm afraid I have to call it done where it is. Wish I could work on it more, but this and another huuuuge project need to be done before the 15th.  :blind:

Thank you all for your help with this! I feel like I learned a lot.  ;D I'll post pictures when it's done.

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Pixel Art / Re: Pengo the Penguin Sprite
« on: January 11, 2009, 06:28:16 am »
The stomach would probably move a bit more than that. What's bothering me even more is that the head seems to be moving left and right, but not the beak.  :0

Oh, and there are a few jaggies in some of your frames, but it seems like just a few quick fixes. :D

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Pixel Art / Re: Gunslinger
« on: January 11, 2009, 05:09:47 am »
The whole pose looks awkward, but especially that hand in the pocket. She's also leaned too far back and her head is scrunched down, giving the impression that she has no neck. Or is about to fall over. Make her stand up straighter, or at least change the in-pocket hand to balance her out a bit.

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Pixel Art / Re: {wip} exploration platformer graphics
« on: January 10, 2009, 07:53:59 pm »
I like that style, with the dark shadows and spirals and all, but I can't help but think it looks a little messy. :/

As for the characters, they're a bit hard to read, to me anyway. Might be due to some slight pillow shading you have going on there. :0

Can't wait to see what you do with it though, looks interesting.  ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP/NUDITY] Naughty Angel
« on: January 10, 2009, 02:04:01 am »
Not sure about the shading on the dress. Feathers and skin look good so far, though her proportions are off. The head is far too tall. Try tracing it and you'll see what I mean.

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Pixel Art / Re: Quantum Core
« on: January 09, 2009, 05:47:57 am »
I like the darker variety better. It matches the rest of the background, and it lets the other characters stand out more.

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Pixel Art / Re: Me!
« on: January 09, 2009, 01:27:47 am »
Hmm. Quake, your edit definitely makes the skin more smooth, I think, but it's just too dark for me. xP I tried making the midtone a bit lighter instead of making the light tone darker. Dunno if it really accomplished much though. :/



I feel like I'm reaching the point where I can't do much more on this piece. Or maybe I'm just sick of looking at it. XD Anyway, I need to start constructing it out of cardboard soon, so I'll call it done wherever I'm at with it by Saturday evening.

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