Well I haven't posted here in a while. Unfortunately last time I did, I gave up on my piece soon afterward.
Anyway, this is something I started a couple months ago for a challenge on Pixel Joint, I ran out of time and quit working on it though. I finally decided to try to finish it, but I think I might need some help.
One of the biggest problems I've had with this piece is the lack of depth. It just looks too flat for me. Of course the shading's not done, so I'm going to be working on that right now. But if I can get any suggestions in the mean-time it would really help.