@cave: Ah yes, earlier i realised the collarbones were too highly placed, so i've fixed that. Not sure if that was the main source of the problem though, but it may help. The rest of the team can't really see any other faults with the shoulders, if you can let me know why they look dislocated that would help alot. Cheers for the comment.
@trem: Omg pro edit trem. Yeah, the no-nose thing is a stylistic choice, even though many don't look half bad (such as yours works very well) it just won't work with the style we're going for. Your lips are very nice, much better than the ones i tried before, i'll try and improve upon my own with yours as reference. I also love the way you did the eyes, and the crease above the eyelid that i tried to incorporate before but just couldnt, really looks good here. The generic mouth and eyes will have plenty of variations, so your edit will defintely help inspire others, and improve upon the ones at hand.
To be honest i didn't notice i was working with pure black, didn't cross my mind. But i agree it's not very nice against the 70-lightness purple. I'll see what i can do about changing it.
Thanks alot for the comments guys. We really appreciate the input.