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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Another portrait (nudity)
« on: December 30, 2013, 07:37:15 pm »
first, here Ive done a rough paint over
okay imageshack keeps deleting my image (because nudity?) let me find a different host
I didnt touch the face but the body has some proportion issues. First check the height of the left (our left) shoulder in relation to the chin. Then notice the height of the right shoulder in relation to the left. Once you raise the left shoulder, see if it appears to be coming out far enough. Now check the distance between the chin and the top of the boobs, use the head as a reference. Now check the length of the boobs compared to the head, you actually made them too small.
Now dont think about lines as outlines, but rather as thin shadows. In the case of deliniating the stomach with the bottom of the boob you dont really need a line, just a darker shade underneath. well the edit should explain the rest (looking through my folder this is the 5th edit of yours Ive done )
oh and fix your link to the reference please.
okay imageshack keeps deleting my image (because nudity?) let me find a different host
I didnt touch the face but the body has some proportion issues. First check the height of the left (our left) shoulder in relation to the chin. Then notice the height of the right shoulder in relation to the left. Once you raise the left shoulder, see if it appears to be coming out far enough. Now check the distance between the chin and the top of the boobs, use the head as a reference. Now check the length of the boobs compared to the head, you actually made them too small.
Now dont think about lines as outlines, but rather as thin shadows. In the case of deliniating the stomach with the bottom of the boob you dont really need a line, just a darker shade underneath. well the edit should explain the rest (looking through my folder this is the 5th edit of yours Ive done )
oh and fix your link to the reference please.