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JoeCreates
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Steve Animations
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September 28, 2014, 12:21:45 am
I've started working on a team project about a disgruntled office worker called Steve. Looking for feedback on style and animation. Thanks!
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Manupix
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Re: Steve Animations
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September 28, 2014, 06:42:31 pm
Looks great. Nothing constructive to add I'm afraid =)
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PixelPiledriver
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Re: Steve Animations
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September 28, 2014, 06:58:35 pm
Perhaps somewhat odd that you chose different depth colors for these 2 animations.
Against the dark backdrop I actually thought the other arm was missing.
Also my gf and I couldn't agree on what or where his nose and mouth were.
But he's pretty cool.
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JoeCreates
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Re: Steve Animations
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September 28, 2014, 07:41:32 pm
Interesting . . . what are the candidates for mouth and nose?
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dustinaux
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Re: Steve Animations
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September 28, 2014, 07:55:30 pm
Looks nice!
Not directed at me but personally I thought he didn't have a mouth at all until it was mentioned, then noticed the white pixels on his chin which look like gritted teeth? They are barely noticeable at small sizes. Hope that helps!
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michelcote
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Re: Steve Animations
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September 28, 2014, 11:15:04 pm
I think it might be that triangular cheekbone that's throwing people off? I like the oversized gun style
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NowvaB
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Re: Steve Animations
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September 29, 2014, 12:59:10 am
Hmm. I managed to see the mouth & nose right away but I might just sit too close to the screen.
I believe you should shrink that cheekbone though, or at least add one to the other side of his face.
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Re: Steve Animations
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September 29, 2014, 05:48:23 am
I thought line beneath his nose was his mouth, just smiling slyly..
He's a pretty cool guy though so I took a shot at making an edit..
(old vs new)
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YellowLime
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Re: Steve Animations
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September 29, 2014, 10:46:45 am
I thought the same as Seiseki-- that the nose was a slyly grinning mouth, and the pointy thing to the right was his nose.
I liked him better that way
(But he wouldn't be much of a disgruntled worker anymore)
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