I personally think it needs an extra shade to add more depth..
i think that makes the piece look, umm its hard to explain... well it make it look not as soft. i like it without the intense amount of light... now that i think about it..before it kinda looked like a pirate at sunset, especially since where the light source is coming from. and i like it like that.
i made one las edit, and i think im done.
thank you guys for all of your help!