Grim, you made him a creepy bald old guy
lol yeah i know
partly intentional so the methods would need to be extrapolated/interpreted more than just copied, that and just 'coz
@Final what type of style are you aiming for? if you are aiming for Super Deformed anime style, then I think the head needs softer curves and shape, and if it's for a platform game, I tend to try and remove outlines from the bottom of his feet, so his feet will be flush to the surface and not doubling above it, like the way in my edit he stands on the image boundary imagine that the area below his feet (forum post background) is the ground/platform he is standing on.