I think the shoulder melds into the neck too much and perhaps the shoulder could jut out a bit more.
I do this CONSTANTLY, heh. Annoyed by this error. I already outed it a bit, but I'll probably do it more. Realistically, it would require a reposition of the chest too, but eh.
(the one on the arm is more interesting, though totally different than the other, incompatible styles, if i may)
not so incompatible. See everything coming halfway slowly?
but the bicep/tricep area all the way down to the elbow on the left arm is too big/thick, while the muscles are undefined, and the curvature of the leg in the back makes it look almost broken.
both good points. I'll work on the arms more, probably tighten them up a bit. Leg already touched to adress the point. Work?
im guessing he focuses on the upper body a tad bit more than the lower ?
You mean as if he worked out or something? This isn't really warrior physique at all to be frank. People who train for battle arrive at less defined muscle tone than the superhero anatomy/bodybuilder paradigm have it, since it's muscle to
work not to
show but I'm not trying to be uber-realistic here anyway. The legs are less worked than the chest and arms, yes. Mostly a personal subconscious thing since I find uber-swollen upper legs repulsive.
Thanks everybody for comments and critique!