I got the same kind of perspective feeling from the beam as Faktablad.
I also agree in that the bottom of the image should be kept.
Also, my curiosity has been piqued as to where that red light is coming from.
The horizon is hardly noticable with such low contrast. Is that building way in the distance supposed to be shooting another beam? I'd think it would be more visible even at that distance, with how bright the near one is...Speaking of how bright the beam is, it makes me think that the opposite side of the hill should be darker, and as Flakkabad said, the beam should be casting some light onto the rocks below.
The smoke coming from the building doesn't seem on par with the clouds.
I really like this piece, though.