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Pixel Art / Re: Aldo's Adventure
« on: March 20, 2008, 03:01:19 am »
really nice sprites and tiles
but i have a critique for ya
4 in fact
-Those trees.. I recommend you making its leaves bigger and add more contrast to the trunk. Check some real trees for references
-I suppose that rock is wip so... but I would remove its outlines
-The bananas seems very polygonal, if thats your intention, then its ok lol
-The sign and the hud dont have a lot of wooden texture.
and one overall critique: donīt mix between outlined and without outlines sprites. It won't look ok. Just choose one of those.
but i have a critique for ya
4 in fact
-Those trees.. I recommend you making its leaves bigger and add more contrast to the trunk. Check some real trees for references
-I suppose that rock is wip so... but I would remove its outlines
-The bananas seems very polygonal, if thats your intention, then its ok lol
-The sign and the hud dont have a lot of wooden texture.
and one overall critique: donīt mix between outlined and without outlines sprites. It won't look ok. Just choose one of those.