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Topic: Odeka: Mockup (Read 21700 times)
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Re: Atilus
Reply #10 on:
October 05, 2008, 01:27:55 am
Why not make it normal beige, or maybe Blue and White?
I'm from a Roman/Greek backround so this is awesome for me
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Last Edit: October 05, 2008, 04:56:07 am by $ymbol
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mozzy
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Re: Atilus
Reply #11 on:
October 05, 2008, 03:29:25 am
How about this?
I took off a few angles on the middle part.
Now it looks like the top is too thin and the base is too wide..
crits pls (:
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The Wild thing
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Re: Atilus
Reply #12 on:
October 05, 2008, 03:52:56 am
Just make the top wider.
It's definatley better than the Purple+Green one, by the way.
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Last Edit: October 05, 2008, 03:58:24 am by $ymbol
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mozzy
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Re: Atilus
Reply #13 on:
October 05, 2008, 01:16:54 pm
mmk.
I want this to be perfect though so need more halp
And I'm fine with editing too, the best way to show what you mean imo.
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Re: Atilus
Reply #14 on:
October 05, 2008, 02:56:34 pm
Sorry if it sounds like I want to change your view on the theme, but I think it should be more like this-
Messy edit
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mozzy
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Re: Atilus
Reply #15 on:
October 05, 2008, 04:08:00 pm
Love it, thanks for the idea, heres mine-
I think the arch on the right seems a little off.
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Fatalis67
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Re: Atilus
Reply #16 on:
October 05, 2008, 06:08:18 pm
I like the way this structure is going. The new coloring looks excellent. The original burned my eyes. They hurt now
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mozzy
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Re: Atilus
Reply #17 on:
October 05, 2008, 11:06:17 pm
Minimockup, won't be able to finish this until Tuesday most likely. The blue structure doesn't belong in this area so don't worry about the clashing colors.
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tehwexxl0rz
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Swing the bat.
Re: Atilus
Reply #18 on:
October 06, 2008, 05:56:56 pm
This is really looking great!
In the mockup, one little thing that bothers me is that the wall trim seems to jump to the foreground. The bright contrast makes it hard to determine which line is the floor at first glance.
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Re: Atilus
Reply #19 on:
October 12, 2008, 05:07:30 pm
I dont really have much to say critique wise, to my eyes it looks great. The two characters you have here have so much... well, character for such small sprites. Excellent work IMO.
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