Hey kcilc, thanks for replying and thanks for the edit.
but im sorry to say, i dont agree with you on the most part of the edit.
I do agree with you on the arm placement, though and the idea of AAing the hat.
The reason the shorts arent thin, is because they aren't thin shorts.
I made an edit based on your suggestions but didnt take them all into account.
-reduced the colour count to 11+ trans
-changed the (our left)arm and shoulder
-added AA to the hat
-Edited the shorts a bit, upped contrast and added a crease and a line up the middle
I don't want to sound like someone who just makes excuses for not changing things, but i just dont agree with some of the changes made.
Thanks heaps, more c+c is welcome.