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Topic: Space Trooper + First Monstar (Read 18833 times)
Opacus
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Entangled
Re: Space Trooper
Reply #10 on:
February 06, 2007, 11:51:56 pm
I think the head needs some movement.
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Stwelin
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Re: Space Trooper
Reply #11 on:
February 06, 2007, 11:55:09 pm
He 'twists' the wrong way when he walks. Even though his arms are not swinging because he is holding his little gun, the shoulders suggest that his same arm goes forward when he walks, should be opposite, to keep balance...
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Sherman Gill
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Re: Space Trooper
Reply #12 on:
February 07, 2007, 12:12:02 am
Hmm...
How does this look?
Damn you red text!
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Quote from: ndrake on July 25, 2008, 03:37:32 pm
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SCiDT
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Experimentalist
Re: Space Trooper
Reply #13 on:
February 07, 2007, 01:04:02 am
Its a cute sprite
I think the animation is still a bit off. IMHO you should animate him with more turn in the body. Let's say from his 3/4 angle to side then back to the 3/4 angle obviously.
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Souly
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Re: Space Trooper
Reply #14 on:
February 07, 2007, 01:33:09 am
The antennas look like they're not attached to the head.
Since his head is turning, shouldn't the antennas position move?
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Sherman Gill
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Re: Space Trooper
Reply #15 on:
February 07, 2007, 04:01:24 am
Progress:
I couldn't get the body turning to be as noticeable as I want
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Quote from: ndrake on July 25, 2008, 03:37:32 pm
Oh yes naked women are beautiful
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Souly
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Re: Space Trooper
Reply #16 on:
February 07, 2007, 04:11:05 am
His left leg is way too jumpy.
It goes much faster then the right one so it makes it look like he's skipping.
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Sherman Gill
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Re: Space Trooper
Reply #17 on:
February 07, 2007, 05:31:20 am
Hopefully this fixes everything
Thanks everyone, for your help so far.
Edit: Just realized his shoulder freaks out. No good!
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Quote from: ndrake on July 25, 2008, 03:37:32 pm
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Ryan Cordel
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Re: Space Trooper
Reply #18 on:
February 07, 2007, 10:40:28 am
What seems odd is that his gun bounces like it's made out of jelly. I don't think many, or even
any
gun woobles like that.
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SCiDT
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Experimentalist
Re: Space Trooper
Reply #19 on:
February 07, 2007, 03:54:12 pm
It still doesn't seem right...
maybe ill try my hand at it. Would probably just do a sloppy animation.
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