the head in jww's batman is unclear due to that very strong specular on the cheek, is it? Also the shape of the skull seems wrong.

I'm pretty sure that spec is supposed to be his right eye.  The head is extremely stylized... which I like!

Overall these both are great.  Yours, Ryumaru, is easier to distinguish and is technically really well done, but I like the pose and attitude of jww's.  Great job, both of you!

Very nice!  Hands look a bit small to me, but then again, I tend to make them larger than what's correct.  The new pose is better, but I feel like the upper body could be exaggerated a little more, even.

That leg is real real nice!

Hmm.. I actually think I like the older version better.  I don't know if any anatomy was glaringly off, but the edit loses some of the curvaciousness the original had.  The edit feels to "modelesque" it lacks the femininity the older version had.

I agree... you made her look too hard.  The highlighting is also too strong, imo.

One thing you did that I liked, Zach, is you brought in the butt and pulled the stomach in some.  And it's not an argument about big/skinny girls (voluptuous girls are more interesting to me, anyway), but rather because in the original her SIDE is just disproportionately wide.  It's not as obvious because her arm is covering the area, but if you take away the arm it looks as if the her side is as wide as her front (at least to me)!  Also notice the way the butt to the back is angled (suggesting that she's leaning forward) whereas the front/stomach is fairly vertical (suggesting that she's sitting straight up).

Also, I think the frame should be a little thicker.

Making those changes would make this an A++ piece to me rather than an A+.

It's no leaf

D'oh!  I can't read.

I like it!  The fact that he's examining two bugs on a leaf is great.

The stones are rather round, though.  They look like stacked cannonballs.