Here's an edit of the W.I.P. I tried to address the anatomy and composition issues. After I get the body down, I'll probably do some more work on the hair. I think it could use some more attention. Any opinions on color choice? Pose?
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I took a look at my old files and picked up a particularly interesting old piece. I started reworking it. I hope the improvements are substantial. I've chosen to take her in a different direction ethnically, so C&C is welcome, along with (my favorite) edits.I started by reworking the face, breasts, hair, and cannon.
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