You kept Top's mouth but completely changed his body language. It's sort of confusing, maybe something more confident rather than blank?
Edit: oops you did change it, then you changed it back. Happy medium? And his rolled sleeve might look better higher (above elbow) and/or tilted because right now it looks like it will fall down his arm!
Edit2: I disagree with I Am Uh, it gives him character and was the whole purpose of the cane. Why not ditch the cane and go back to the original pose if he'll just be standing?