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Offline aramaki

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Platformer mockup. Yellowstone level

on: June 04, 2010, 01:53:59 pm


I would like to request c&c on this mockup. Especially, on the colour scheme and contrast.
I'm also kind of ran out of imagination. Please, give me some advice on typical objects, or enviromental pieces I could add to this level?
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Re: Platformer mockup. Yellowstone level

Reply #1 on: June 04, 2010, 02:26:47 pm
The statues are almost invisible and the foreground is hard to see. I advise you to darken the grey and red background considerably until they pop out more.
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