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Angel (WIP) Need Help

on: October 03, 2010, 07:09:50 pm
Hey.
I need some help with my new picture.
My Picture is still a bit rough.
Hope somebody can help me a bit!



Thank you Elk, for your Help!
« Last Edit: October 03, 2010, 07:11:30 pm by Smood »

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Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help

Reply #1 on: October 03, 2010, 07:22:31 pm
Her left leg curves around strangely in that it seems that she has no rigid bones there. I think you need to have a knee and a straighter lower leg.

Her dress blends into the wings a bit, have you tried using lighter blues/white for the wings.

The pose is nice and dynamic though, and I'll be interested to see how this develops. :)

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Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help

Reply #2 on: October 03, 2010, 07:29:14 pm
Thank you. Now i try to use a bit more white and blue for wings!

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Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help

Reply #3 on: October 04, 2010, 02:05:02 pm
Okay. I change the colour of the wings, and work a bit on them!


Now im working at this knee!

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Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help

Reply #4 on: October 04, 2010, 04:49:48 pm
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Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help

Reply #5 on: October 04, 2010, 04:52:58 pm
Looking better! The dress still looks a bit muddled to me, are you using a photo reference?

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Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help

Reply #6 on: October 04, 2010, 05:20:18 pm
Yeah, but just really for the wings.
I took some pictures from google (like a dress or something) but the only picture i still have, is this:
http://www.hd-gbpics.de/gbbilder/engel/engel5.jpg

Here are some Working Stages:

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Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help

Reply #7 on: October 04, 2010, 07:01:28 pm
Damned. I need help with these feets and the face. Anybody who can help?

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Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help

Reply #8 on: October 05, 2010, 05:48:56 pm
Her right hand (our left) looks like it got caught in blender, and her right wing (our left) doesn't have the texture of a wing; it has the texture of her clothes.
« Last Edit: October 05, 2010, 10:32:33 pm by Drakojin »

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Re: Angel (WIP) Need Help

Reply #9 on: October 05, 2010, 06:09:27 pm
ohh i see. Oka. It will be change soon!