would be nice if your .gif paused on the last frame, or you included a pic of the last frame without animation. the main problem with the outline is the lack of understanding of facial structure. outlines are actually pretty easy when you know what you're doing! bust out that sketchbook and start practicing, cuz it is going to take you a while, and no matter how many people fix your outline, if you can't draw the outline properly you definitely will not be able to color it properly!