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Offline Sherman Gill

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John the Revelator [WIP]

on: March 27, 2007, 07:06:13 pm
Product of way too much Depeche mode.

I'm sure there's plenty I could do with it right now, but you know, wanna get help early on.

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Re: John the Revelator [WIP]

Reply #1 on: March 27, 2007, 09:27:01 pm
Is his head tilted to one side?  Because otherwise it doesn't match the perspective on the body.  Disturbing piece.

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Re: John the Revelator [WIP]

Reply #2 on: March 27, 2007, 09:30:11 pm
Well, it was supposed to be turned a bit, but I do see how the perspective is wacky. I think the horns are what's throwing it off, maybe :O
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Re: John the Revelator [WIP]

Reply #3 on: March 27, 2007, 09:32:46 pm
It's not the horns.  It looked that way before the horns were added.  Though they are adding to it.

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Re: John the Revelator [WIP]

Reply #4 on: March 27, 2007, 10:00:26 pm

I was reminded of Arucard.

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Re: John the Revelator [WIP]

Reply #5 on: March 27, 2007, 10:03:02 pm
I love Alucard...Who would have guessed  ???

Its interesting how your piece has a mouth for a crotch as well  :lol:

I look forward to seeing how this finishes

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Re: John the Revelator [WIP]

Reply #6 on: March 27, 2007, 10:41:21 pm
Reorgh! (rough
) Background! No horns! No neck-mouth-jaw-mandible! Lower Legs!
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Re: John the Revelator [WIP]

Reply #7 on: March 28, 2007, 01:04:49 am
sweet. ;D The legs perspective/angling seems off especially the (our) left one.Also, he looks like he's wearing shin guards, and the feet looks kinda awkward. The mouth at the crotch looks a little odd, almost like pubic hair :-[The lines on the stomach, look like the lines from your ribcage, which means they should be on the chest, unless they are supposed to be abs..or just weird :-[ I am really diggin' that pallete though
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Re: John the Revelator [WIP]

Reply #8 on: March 28, 2007, 05:15:17 am

Tried to fix the legs, and added more detail to the face.
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Re: John the Revelator [WIP]

Reply #9 on: March 28, 2007, 11:10:55 pm


Finished?
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