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Cure
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
Reply #10 on:
March 20, 2008, 09:00:34 pm
Those doors are fucking huge. Who's going to help him open them?
And I guess I expected to see less of the roof and patio, you're right, the perspective is strange.
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Dusty
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
Reply #11 on:
March 20, 2008, 09:15:03 pm
I think this may be a little more easy on the eyes, and help separates him from his background. It's messy, but you get the idea.
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tocky
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
Reply #12 on:
March 21, 2008, 12:55:41 am
I think it also might be better if you project the house back a tile, something like:
(quick and dirty, i used dusty's edit, i think photobucket jpegized it)
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ndchristie
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
Reply #13 on:
March 21, 2008, 01:11:26 am
both of those edits look drained of life, but take what i say with a grain of salt as my monitor desaturates everything quite a bit.
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Ace
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
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March 21, 2008, 03:28:43 pm
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ndchristie
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
Reply #15 on:
March 21, 2008, 05:48:17 pm
still, wicked scale argument
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ElementZero
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
Reply #16 on:
March 21, 2008, 06:09:00 pm
Thanks for the advice! I have desaturated the house a bit. Furthermore I gave the sidewalls some perspective. I'm quite happy with it now. And only for Cure I placed two adult sprites in front of the doors to show that big doors are necessary
@Ace: sorry, but your screen seems really too saturated and too bright to me.
Now on to the sword slash animation
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Last Edit: March 21, 2008, 06:26:30 pm by ElementZero
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brianskywalker
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
Reply #17 on:
March 21, 2008, 06:48:36 pm
Quote from: ElementZero on March 21, 2008, 06:09:00 pm
@Ace: sorry, but your screen seems really too saturated and too bright to me.
Don't you mean
un-
saturated?
I gotta say though, I did like those edits. I think the water could use a bit of desaturation.
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Ace
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Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
Reply #18 on:
March 21, 2008, 07:40:29 pm
It's just me, I like things a bit bright and cutesy. >:
I do like the house's colour now. It's a happy medium. I still have a problem with the background-rocks' AA, though, but if it doesn't seem to bother you, then... XD
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Feron
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Carpe Diem
Re: Odem Forest - The Chronicles
Reply #19 on:
March 21, 2008, 07:42:22 pm
That beach scene looks so fucking sweet at 2X resolution.
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