This was my first sprite and I would very much like to know what I did right and what I did wrong on it. It is _sort_ of in the style of FF6 sprites (uses 16 colours, 16x24 pixels) but I did not follow the style exactly. I made one that is _supposed_ to be wearing a scarf (don't know if anyone can tell   ) and one without it. I did this because I didn't know if the scarf detracted from the overall image, however I really liked the idea of having one.
Comments would be greatly appreciated.

(With scarf)
(Without scarf)

Thanks in advance!