Updated. Thanks, all, for the crittage.
InvaderLupus: Shadows are in, and rightly so
. Thanks for pointing that out, 'cause bad as I am at cast shadows, I think even my poor attempt helps give the appearance of
some kind of ground. This (the addition of shadow) is probably the most significant update. Oh, and in regards to your other comment, colour conservation is important to me for some reason. Regardless, I added a new shade in the update. Can never have too much AA, y'know (well... not exactly true, but carrying on...).
Darien: You gave me a cool mental image by suggesting darker background. That, combined with stronger (more atmospheric) lighting could've given this a way more ominous atmosphere, which would have undoubtedly been cool. Like you said though, it'd pretty well blow all the AA and stuff, so... Appy polly loggies for not implementing, 'cause it's a flip horrorshow suggestion.
Alkaline: Smoke from gun=at least 10% more noticeable. Hurrah! Outer AA stays, tho. I'm an AA whore.
Razz: You have no idea how happy men in tight briefs make m.... uh... thanks!
Tinygiant: Perspective issues, no doubt, are rampant
. I tried to sort of maybe kinda touch on them, but I probably failed. After all, if I knew how to fix 'em, they probably wouldn't have happened in the first place
. Anything stick out specifically?
Alex: Anything particular wrong with the person, or is it just a personal preference kind of thing? I know he's.. uh.. a tad different then the robots, so I can totally see where you're coming from if it's just the style that gets you. Otherwise, though, let me know so I can do summink about it! Either way, thankees, glad you like.
David: