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Topic: Robot (C&C please) (Read 2085 times)
Rohn
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Robot (C&C please)
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October 22, 2007, 04:49:35 am
I'm new to the site, and I was wondering if someone might have some c&c for a piece I'm working on. Hope you can help me out!
Please keep in mind that it's one of my first, and still a work in progress. Thanks!
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fil_razorback
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Re: Robot (C&C please)
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October 22, 2007, 05:26:06 pm
General robot critiques :
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=4986.0
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=5164.0
Now about yours :
- Lack of contrast and volume
- Use of dithering (metal + dithering = bad)
- Hideous background color (I suggest gray #666666 not to screw up your color choices)
- The design could use some more thinking too. Robots are rarely spherical blocs : keep in mind it was actually MADE with PIECES.
Good luck ^^
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