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Offline Rohn

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Robot (C&C please)

on: October 22, 2007, 04:49:35 am
I'm new to the site, and I was wondering if someone might have some c&c for a piece I'm working on.  Hope you can help me out!



Please keep in mind that it's one of my first, and still a work in progress.  Thanks!  ;D

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Re: Robot (C&C please)

Reply #1 on: October 22, 2007, 05:26:06 pm
General robot critiques :
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=4986.0
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=5164.0

Now about yours :
- Lack of contrast and volume
- Use of dithering (metal + dithering = bad)
- Hideous background color (I suggest gray #666666 not to screw up your color choices)
- The design could use some more thinking too. Robots are rarely spherical blocs : keep in mind it was actually MADE with PIECES.

Good luck ^^