Thanks for the c+c. Anyways: the mouth was supposed to be one of those stylish up-the-cheek-mouth, and that's why it's so far back. The outline of the beard disappears just because the nose already has an outline there, and I didn't think two were necessary. Well, I might think about it.
Anyways, I don't think I will make any edits, dunno if I have what it takes. Especially about the colors: might try it but I think I might be too lazy.