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Re: Mermaid!

Reply #90 on: January 19, 2007, 10:41:32 am
You know her right hand, it has bright green stuff. Is that supposed to be webbed fingers? Maybe it would be better without that.
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Re: Mermaid!

Reply #91 on: January 19, 2007, 11:43:53 am
Also ...

I don't like the lighting / highlight under her boobs in this current version. I do like the little trails on the bees though!
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Re: Mermaid!

Reply #92 on: January 21, 2007, 08:38:10 pm
Ta-daa! The absolutely last edit:

Edited hands, butt (just a little), horizon (was 1 pixel unaligned, also moved it higher up), more shine on the apples, also dithered them all instead of just the two from before, made the frame a little thicker. Plus some other small nitpicks. I am really happy with the result, but I need to move on now. So this is definitely the last edit.


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