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Bird animation Critique.

on: May 16, 2017, 03:41:52 pm
Hello guys. I started to animate again but I tend to make a lot of erros because Im still pretty noob when it comes animation. I would love to hear some  criticism. The animation supposed to be faster but when I saved it as Gif it turned to very slow.




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Re: Bird animation Critique.

Reply #1 on: May 18, 2017, 02:37:24 pm
I got some help from Tig forum. It seems I had some problem with position. The the small touch  like position improves a lot.
 

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Re: Bird animation Critique.

Reply #2 on: May 18, 2017, 03:10:18 pm
Oh yeah, big improvement! I'd have​ Never noticed!
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Re: Bird animation Critique.

Reply #3 on: May 19, 2017, 10:41:56 am
I think there is 1 frame too much of his wings rising, it should be an inbetween instead. I tried to make this edit myself to see if it worked but wings are hard, so please forgive me.

Other than that I think that by changing the frame rate of some frames could make the wing claps a lot more heavier. Probably doesn't fit such a small bird, but if it was a bigger bird it would definitely improve it.
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Re: Bird animation Critique.

Reply #4 on: May 19, 2017, 11:24:56 pm
I think there is 1 frame too much of his wings rising, it should be an inbetween instead. I tried to make this edit myself to see if it worked but wings are hard, so please forgive me.

Yeah I notice that.

No problem! Better? Or are the  last wing too low?



Other than that I think that by changing the frame rate of some frames could make the wing claps a lot more heavier. Probably doesn't fit such a small bird, but if it was a bigger bird it would definitely improve it.
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I have done that in Original version but I cannot show it because when I save it it looks slow..
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