AuthorTopic: Rice field need C&C.  (Read 2958 times)

Offline Marcpixels

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Rice field need C&C.

on: February 21, 2010, 10:42:17 pm
 :( i Dont know how make this look better..

is a simple landscape of rice fields, Roads .. a Montains..



i Took this img for ref
http://www.tuat.ac.jp/~pochi/images/Rice%20field.jpg

 ;D i hope see some replys soon
« Last Edit: February 22, 2010, 12:48:40 am by Marcpixels »

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Re: Rice field need C&C.

Reply #1 on: February 22, 2010, 02:30:06 am
The sun's pretty far to the left; could be a sunrise/sunset. How bout adding some tinges of orange or pink?
Even when it's midday, the sky isn't made of one solid color; it gets brighter near the horizon.
If you notice, in your reference picture, the closest rice plants can be seen clearly, while the farther ones group together to create texture. Try to show that depth - right now I just see lines that are all of the same width.
I'm also going to say your green is too bright.

Great start! :)

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Re: Rice field need C&C.

Reply #2 on: February 22, 2010, 04:56:19 pm
Tns for the C&C.  i will try to make better texture.

i think my green color is good.

Some update later  ;D