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Offline freespyryt

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[WIP] Miner

on: May 15, 2010, 12:52:32 am
So I'm taking a short break from my other game to work on something new, hopefully up my skills a bit and get some more stamina to go back and work on that grass   :blind:
So here's a new thing I've been working on. He's a miner, I did it a different style than my first guy, as this is going to be a completely different type of game.
Walk animations:




I'm just looking for some C&C on this piece...
Side note: my boyfriend says the light on his hat looks funny and the outlines (or lack thereof), FWIW.
« Last Edit: May 15, 2010, 09:15:40 pm by freespyryt »

Offline Mokkan

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Re: [WIP] Miner

Reply #1 on: May 20, 2010, 05:37:03 am
The side view looks a bit odd to me. There's no shading on the helmet, and the light on the helmet doesn't look like a light from the side. Also, the front and back views seem to imply that he's wearing pants, but the side view looks like a onesy or a jump suit.
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Offline freespyryt

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Re: [WIP] Miner

Reply #2 on: May 22, 2010, 06:43:05 pm
Thanks for the advice! I took it and here's the result of the changes:




I changed the light (making it smaller) and I tweaked the outline a bit. Also, I darkened the belt. Thanks for the advice!