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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #10 on: February 09, 2010, 12:31:53 am
Ok, yes then.

Hah, bullcrap! Most of your sprites strike very good poses.

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #11 on: February 09, 2010, 03:54:48 pm
also how does his legs work. One of his feet really looks elevated O: that might be a problem?

I think that's supposed to be in perspective. As in, that leg is farther back than the front leg. So he's supposed to be standing at an angle.

However, if he's supposed to be standing at an angle, his upper body looks far too straightforward, so the pose might be a bit awkward in that respect.

Besides that, it looks awesome! Interesting concept.
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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #12 on: March 06, 2010, 09:56:22 pm

right so picking this up again



something about the legs is bugging me but i can't figure it out
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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #13 on: March 06, 2010, 09:59:26 pm
I think the legs look a little off, too. Might be the fact that they're so thin compared to the body. Though, if you wanted to emphasize upper-body strength, you might be able to get away with tiny humanoid legs, instead of the more beastly-looking legs you have now. Aside from all that, something about the angle of the legs seems off to me, but I can't say for sure.

Also the feet don't look very threatening maybe?
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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #14 on: March 07, 2010, 05:47:03 pm
IDK, maybe it's the toes... i think it would look better without them. from the top you make it looks like some epic giant robot shit, and then with the bottom it looks alien. it would look best like you had them in the earlier versions of this. Otherwise, I think you did a good job on the legs. maybe add some armor, or something robotic on the legs as well.

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #15 on: March 08, 2010, 06:09:59 am
I can't tell if he's off balance or if something's drawn at the wrong angle. The limbs suggest the wrong angle whereas the torso suggests the balance thing.

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #16 on: March 08, 2010, 12:44:41 pm
i don't really think it's that the legs and the bottom part don't match....i think it's the arms. Because otherwise it fits in well. try moving the left arm more to the back (like his left foot.) and move the right arm just a bit forward.

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #17 on: March 08, 2010, 01:48:28 pm

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #18 on: March 08, 2010, 01:50:30 pm
Left leg and arm are the only problem areas as far as i can see.
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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #19 on: March 08, 2010, 07:18:46 pm
well uh


i've given up on this just so people in this thread know
not because of anything that happened here i just hate working on it
its more of a chore to try and finish at this point than it is something i actually want to see finished so
yeah