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look at me im a tank

on: February 05, 2010, 10:42:12 pm


last time im revisiting old work for awhile

why do all of your characters have the same stance 1up

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 02:55:52 am
Nice job, nice shading etc.
There aren't really any problems, considering it's still a WIP... I suggest giving the eyes... or what ever that's called, more of a glow. It would give a more menacing look. I can't really tell ATM, but the legs seem a bit short, maybe because the back leg appears to be a lot shorter then the other. If it's due to distance, then I suggest making the other arm to the back more as well. Are the abs and parts of the arm suppose to be skin? If so, I would suggest adding just a tad more contrast to the armor.

Also, is this for wonderbros? Because I'm a fan of the game, and would like to seem some progress for it. I noticed you posted a bit more stuff for it on pixeljoint. Anyway, I tried getting the style. You can look through my posts if you'd like to see it. I pm'd you on pixeljoint, btw.

Good luck, I suppose.

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #2 on: February 06, 2010, 10:10:48 pm
>he thinks wonderbros ever had a chance at being finished
girlslaughingandpointing.png

and i know you pm'd me
i didn't answer because you sent me the exact same message two other times that i'm aware of, and i answered both times then


truckin along

i'll get to messing with what you mentioned later, got to this point before i read the post

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #3 on: February 07, 2010, 02:01:11 am
This is so good :) loving the shading and the details! Amazin so far
Im sure you will get another bunch of favorites when posted on PJ LOL

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 03:03:38 am


still gotta try making the eye area have more of a glowing effect


but goddamn that arm was fun to make

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #5 on: February 07, 2010, 07:17:28 pm
sadfaec

I liked that game.
The glow affect could be achieved (I think) if you merge a color from the eye shield thing with the armor.
Still looking good.
Also, do you use a tablet?

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 11:48:11 am
In most cases if something is glowing the light coming from within will be stronger than the speculars (wtf how do I spell this word) hitting the surface, thus there will be no light reflection, so you can just use a solid color for the visor O:

also how does his legs work. One of his feet really looks elevated O: that might be a problem?
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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #7 on: February 08, 2010, 10:18:42 pm
In most cases if something is glowing the light coming from within will be stronger than the speculars (wtf how do I spell this word) hitting the surface, thus there will be no light reflection, so you can just use a solid color for the visor O:

also how does his legs work. One of his feet really looks elevated O: that might be a problem?
i dont even know aaa
the entire body was literally a 5 second sketch until i got around to fixing/cleaning it up

also no i dont use a tablet
been playing kz2 too much busy and haven't worked on this lately
will start back up probably tomorrow
hurr

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #8 on: February 08, 2010, 11:51:14 pm
The arm is awesome . . . for me to poop on.

*makes copious pooping farting noises*

I see a bicep, but the rest is just a twisted nondescript mess of sinew painted blue, with of course a sharp spike at the end.

The pose is oddly hesitant.

But, I like the blues you're using, and I like you.

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Re: look at me im a tank

Reply #9 on: February 08, 2010, 11:57:24 pm
I see a bicep, but the rest is just a twisted nondescript mess of sinew painted blue, with of course a sharp spike at the end.
is what i was going for
did i not pull it off right?  :mean:

alsoalso
i am completely incapable of interesting poses. halp.