WIP Space freight ship

[Tom]

Hi guys,

been working on this for the last few days and it still looks like crap. I know I'm getting better and learning the more I work on it but at this stage I need to take a step back and evaluate.

I feel I need some input or would love to see what others can add or change, or help me not vear in the wrong direction.


Space freighter ship thingie

so yeh this is no where near finished its a huge WIP, but I would love as much input as I can get.

Cheers
Tom

[Olothontor]

Well, let us see here.

You've got some decent detail in there, that's good. For the moment there isn't much to go off of, but might I suggest going into Commercial Critique under the Challenges forum and looking for the Dodonpachi Assembly Line. Save some of those that you like and check out their style, I think It'll help a ton with the excess detailing and shading of said details.

I also presume it's supposed to be top-down and not 3D, so you're set in that area.