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Offline Masna

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Rocket Drop

on: January 14, 2010, 09:43:21 pm
Hey, I made this thing!  Any C+C would be really appreciated.  :D

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Offline Sherman Gill

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Re: Rocket Drop

Reply #1 on: January 14, 2010, 10:11:47 pm
Hi! :)
I really don't think there's much you can do to improve it at this point, it's stylized enough that most of what you can do is superfluous.
You could try different color schemes, though there's nothing wrong with the one you have now (maybe a little too monochromatic?)... It's also got a lot of jagged edges you could smooth out with some AA if you so wish.
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Re: Rocket Drop

Reply #2 on: January 15, 2010, 03:21:17 am
The colors, the concept, and the idea are great.

I think my only peeve is the composition, specifically on the bombs. They have varying sizes, but the coloring is the same throughout. It's hard to tell whether their sizes are different, or they're the same size, but different distances from the viewer. It would be great if there's a way you could show how large a bomb is compared to a building. To me it looks like we're right in front of the bombs and the city is at least 10 miles away in the distance.