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Ironman [WIP]

on: January 13, 2010, 04:00:22 am
no face and bad hands but is everything else ok?

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Re: Ironman [WIP]

Reply #1 on: January 13, 2010, 04:23:44 am
I think one of the things that's gonna help this a lot is removing black outlines:


It's a lazy edit, but you get the idea.
I also moved the head 1px to the left, and some of the chest lines, since they seemed to be looking forward, when the character is standing to the left.

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Re: Ironman [WIP]

Reply #2 on: January 13, 2010, 04:37:37 am
thanks that looks a lot better. now all i have to do is the face

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Re: Ironman [WIP]

Reply #3 on: January 13, 2010, 05:51:28 am

face is added. no longer WIP

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Re: Ironman [WIP]

Reply #4 on: January 13, 2010, 06:03:20 pm
You're not supposed to take other people's edits and expand on them. The intention of edits is that you learn from them, not copy them.

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Re: Ironman [WIP]

Reply #5 on: January 13, 2010, 06:08:48 pm
You're not supposed to take other people's edits and expand on them. The intention of edits is that you learn from them, not copy them.

And besides that, I don't think that piece is no longer WIP. My edit was really lame, i just simply colored all the black lines altogether, and made some minor tweaks.
I don't think it's finished.

Don't know what you want that Ironman for, but it's definitly not perfect.

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Re: Ironman [WIP]

Reply #6 on: January 14, 2010, 04:16:13 am
i never said it was perfect i said its done didnt post it but i finished it

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Re: Ironman [WIP]

Reply #7 on: January 14, 2010, 04:40:56 am
post it then

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Re: Ironman [WIP]

Reply #8 on: January 14, 2010, 05:37:01 am

there

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Re: Ironman [WIP]

Reply #9 on: January 14, 2010, 07:15:08 am
part 2 - the musical