Ironman [WIP]

[Reaper]

no face and bad hands but is everything else ok?

[Jorund]

I think one of the things that's gonna help this a lot is removing black outlines:


It's a lazy edit, but you get the idea.
I also moved the head 1px to the left, and some of the chest lines, since they seemed to be looking forward, when the character is standing to the left.

[Reaper]

thanks that looks a lot better. now all i have to do is the face

[Reaper]

face is added. no longer WIP

[Gil]

You're not supposed to take other people's edits and expand on them. The intention of edits is that you learn from them, not copy them.

[Jorund]

You're not supposed to take other people's edits and expand on them. The intention of edits is that you learn from them, not copy them.

And besides that, I don't think that piece is no longer WIP. My edit was really lame, i just simply colored all the black lines altogether, and made some minor tweaks.
I don't think it's finished.

Don't know what you want that Ironman for, but it's definitly not perfect.

[Reaper]

i never said it was perfect i said its done didnt post it but i finished it

[twodayslate]

post it then

[Reaper]

there

[Mathias]

part 2 - the musical