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Re: what do you think(this is hero from WAYANG WWORLD)

Reply #10 on: January 06, 2010, 01:55:06 am
no this is by my self and the other thread my artwork to..
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Reply #11 on: January 08, 2010, 08:34:39 am
It's'a pillowshaded!

Line art is nice, coloring is not. It's more or less just flood fill with some low-contrast nuances hugging the outlines - not pleasing.

I think that if you just made all the color spaces flat, completely without shading, your image would look much clearer, crisper and pleasing.

And then I think you should reshade it from there with more contrast. Try to shade with big color blocks with the same confidence that you draw solid shapes in your lineart - it's the same theory - you don't TINT the 'filling' of the lineart, you draw new clear shapes within it to show form.

Get it? I don't think I'm being clear D:

(also I really like this spriteycharacter, so don't feel hurt, I just want it to look even better <3 )
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